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Your vision, Your vision. The recitation of a poem of metaphor. And the blink means a throng. Standing and clapping, clapping and clapping. The world remains in grief. Who's forgetting that?!? Death is the same as rain, on either hand. What is happening in the waterways. What's happening. Just eat us. Just eat us. The bread that's reddish. Who watered it. Who irrigated it. And who complains around the misery?

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Date: 8/14/2021 1:17:00 AM
A very original poem. Great thoughts.
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Date: 8/14/2021 3:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Dear friend Victor, have a wonderful weekend

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