Symbiosis

I feed upon nature and it feeds upon me I drink from its waterfalls and swim in its seas I pluck some of its apples and find shade under its trees I rest upon its rocks and run across its leas I bathe under its sun and dance beyond its breeze For it is I who have found nature or has it found me? Written on some rocks beside Al Aawaj Springs in Syria

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Amy Green

Date: 4/15/2010 7:26:00 AM

Symbiosis- what an amazing way to look at the planet. So true it is, yet I wish more felt like this. Another amazing piece.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/12/2010 12:26:00 PM

It found you! Okay, it goes both ways. You have an awesome appreciation of nature. (You should have soup mail, now...I hope. I sent it after your note.)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/8/2010 10:56:00 AM

very well writen. i think you found each other both with poetic expressions. john p.s. the v and e belong in line 8.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/30/2009 7:01:00 PM

oh my! Farah! I can relate! I went camping with my Daughters (ages 19 & 21) on the cliffs overlooking Lake Superior this summer and went down to the rocks daily for inspiration! we think alike! love, jimbo

Sammy Shaq

Date: 7/19/2009 3:45:00 PM

simple, beautiful, and thoughtful. nothing more or less.

Brian Strand

Date: 7/19/2009 12:24:00 AM

Sounds a cool place to be Farah.Talented poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/18/2009 4:39:00 PM

i found your v and e playing in the parking lot. i figured you might need them to make the leaves in this poem. it is a comming aware poem, comming aware of the beauty of nature. well done john h loving iii

Yara Rouhana

Date: 7/13/2009 5:15:00 PM

Beautiful job my friend. Chapeau bas :)

Sue Mason

Date: 7/11/2009 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful writing this .... how is school, farah? when you have the time you could post a note on our Soup mail ... smile ... I would love to hear more about your world.

Date: 7/6/2009 6:04:00 AM

Nice use of rhyme, fitting for your thoughts. I like how you ended your poem with a question. It all flows together quite well. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/6/2009 2:01:00 AM

You have both , found each other , in an excellent presentation , TYone .... As always , write onnnnnnnn ....

Brian Strand

Date: 7/5/2009 11:45:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Farah One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments