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Swords Kill

He thought he was brave and full of wit He thought so indeed, but the grave is what he bit The sword raised above him, a tune of horror The man begged like a peasant, but poorer The sword drew closer, giving a glimpse of the light The man drew his eyes closed, dying in fright

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Date: 5/30/2023 1:22:00 PM
Lizzy, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done !
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Lizzy Kulcsar
Date: 5/30/2023 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much! :D
Date: 5/29/2023 12:13:00 PM
Impressive rhyming, congrats!
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Lizzy Kulcsar
Date: 5/29/2023 12:35:00 PM
Thank you!

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