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Sword Play

Watch
Riposte
Spin, and then
Pique the heart ink
Diffidence showing the appalling link

Firmament encroached; caliginous stars
Ergo; all mars
With but three
Cuts to
Bone

Ah
Remise
Dip again
Ink thus imbued
Recondite quill forthwith shall be  renewed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/26/2012 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tim B. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Tim B. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 3:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:32:00 PM
Tim ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:19:00 PM
Tim congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/30/2012 9:02:00 PM
word play, sword play! Cool one and great word usage.
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:46:00 AM
The action, the play, the thrust and parry; all are a delight to envision. Unusual subject that fascinates my imagination! :)
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Date: 4/28/2012 9:51:00 PM
Wow fantastic write, ones that I really enjoy! I love your word selection like, Pique, caliginous, and imbued! Awesome collection! Great Work!!
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