Tim B Poet Tetractys

Sword Play

Watch
Riposte
Spin, and then
Pique the heart ink
Diffidence showing the appalling link

Firmament encroached; caliginous stars
Ergo; all mars
With but three
Cuts to
Bone

Ah
Remise
Dip again
Ink thus imbued
Recondite quill forthwith shall be  renewed

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Sara Kendrick May 26, 2012 at 4:43 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Ralph Taylor May 23, 2012 at 7:43 PM Congrats on your win, Tim B. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2012 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Tim B. Love, Carol

Prince Ekpemandu May 23, 2012 at 3:03 AM Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2012 at 9:32 PM Tim ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD

David Williams May 22, 2012 at 2:19 PM Tim congrats on your win..David

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2012 at 9:02 PM word play, sword play! Cool one and great word usage.

Elizabeth Wesley April 29, 2012 at 9:46 AM The action, the play, the thrust and parry; all are a delight to envision. Unusual subject that fascinates my imagination! :)

Russell Sivey April 28, 2012 at 9:51 PM Wow fantastic write, ones that I really enjoy! I love your word selection like, Pique, caliginous, and imbued! Awesome collection! Great Work!!