Swirlism

Swirly and curly,
Wiggles and spots,
irrational, irritable thoughts,
Raw feelings,
Limbo,
idealistic thought patterns,
Sense of muddle,
Memory full.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellison Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 5:03 PM
Wow! You just described my muddled brain! LOL Wake up in the morning and wonder what strange stories it has in store for me! Do you think I need help??? LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx
Sullivan Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Awww like wise Jack xx we prob need help the both of us, never mind we are good, life is good muddled brain and all love and best wishes Amanda xx
Grisetti Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 6:56 AM
i feel a headache building in your words.
Sullivan Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Oh dear sorry Joann ;( I can see how though.Muddled head=headache!!!!!! I have a muddled head at the best of times, am I am sure most ppl do at some point in there lives unless they are extremely lucky. Hope you liked it though thanks Amanda xx :)
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Amanda this sounds like inside my head...David
Sullivan Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Me too David, that's why it came to me reasonably easily!!! Hope your head gets unmuddled xxxxxx Amanda :))
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