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Swirling In the Wind

Autumn  leaves will soon be falling
 Summer holds on a little while
 Winter snow will soon be calling
 Autumn leaves will soon be falling
 While on the ground leaves are sprawling 
  Yet Spring will come once more to smile
 Autumn  leaves will soon be falling
 Summer holds on a little while

 8-19-2022

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/21/2022 4:25:00 PM

Beautiful poetry praising autumn, vibrant and graceful. Best regards to you. Joseph.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2022 1:30:00 AM

Love the triolet form, Joseph, and the poetry here, lovely.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/20/2022 10:50:00 PM

Summer brought heat to the trees and a little breeze scattered many leaves. Wonder what's in store for autumn.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/20/2022 7:51:00 AM

WoW! Joseph, You have penned a lovely Autumn Triolet. Well done. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/20/2022 6:42:00 AM

Beautiful poem lauding autumn, Joseph.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/19/2022 7:14:00 PM

As Summer holds on for a little while, I'm anticipating Autumn. It seems many are excited about those swirling leaves. This is beautiful in every way, and I love how you weaved all the seasons within. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2022 6:03:00 PM

Dear Joseph, you capture the anticipation of late summer's transition to fall so beautifully. Vibrant and elegant, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/19/2022 2:10:00 PM

Nice triolet, Joseph. Yep, it's that time of the year!

Daisy Meadows

Date: 8/19/2022 12:51:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2022 12:39:00 PM

love your triolet, Joseph. I am seeing many of them on the fall theme. Maybe I did not read the directions right. I better go check that out!!