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Swirling In a Quandary

Swirling in a Quandary I see the wicked gleam in your eyes, as you snatch from my finger your mother's quaint, platinum ring, which had been the symbol of our eternal love. Why are you breaking my heart, when my only crime is loving you? You let me go swirling in a quandary. I can't convince you that I've been true; you just won't let me through to you. Doing penance in your twisted, dark heart, the fragrance of your cologne lingers long after you depart … making me insane. I wander aimlessly up and down the Quay of Lost Lovers, who've lost their senses and their way. My swagger's gone; my poise is gone; go ahead, take pleasure, watching me quiver... playing your evil games with my bruised heart. Date: 02-26-2021

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Date: 6/5/2021 8:08:00 AM
Hello Pandita, you have delved into deep sad Thoughts in this one, there is an air of Reality that runs through the lines of it Well put together'
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2021 9:41:00 AM
Hi Joe, it's always great to hear from you and receive your lovely comments! Best regards always. Pandita
Date: 5/8/2021 11:09:00 AM
Seems as if a love story gone awry... Love this verse Write On!!
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Date: 7/8/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, James. I really appreciate your kind words. Hugs.Pandita
Date: 2/26/2021 1:20:00 PM
WoW!Pandita, You have used the chosen words very. Your story has a nice flow and nothing seems forced. Best wishes in the contest. Well done. PS, It’s good to see you posting again:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2021 1:49:00 PM
Hi Alexis, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your kind, complimentary words! It's good to be back with you all! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

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