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Swirling Aural Vision

I awake to swirling aural vision a dawn nirvana dazzling shades crisp allure from earth to faraway sky clouds that drift, float and harmonise birds that scatter leafs on green clad trees imposing mountain peak’s peerless zenith Early morning horde salute day ahead zestful footstep mandate for gumption fervour under the sun-drenched copse Water sprinkler’s icy spray cast in rainbow droplet wet haired strollers grin beyond a douse dream colours gold reign now

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Date: 3/7/2025 5:45:00 AM
Creative way to go with this one. I wouldn't want to be caught in a water sprinkler this morning with the nippy air. Sara K
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Date: 7/12/2024 10:05:00 PM
So many beautiful images here. I sure love the etheree form.
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Date: 6/1/2024 5:51:00 AM
Dear Howard, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of the early morning hours, highlighting the beauty and rejuvenation that comes with the start of a new day. The vivid imagery of nature, from swirling aural visions to dazzling shades, evokes a sense of joy and energy, reminding us to appreciate the world around us. The poem paints a picture of a vibrant and colorful morning, filled with sights and sounds that awaken a sense of vitality and renewal within us.
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