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Swirling Aural Vision

I
awake
to swirling
aural vision
a dawn nirvana
dazzling  shades crisp allure
from earth to faraway sky
clouds  that drift, float and harmonise
birds that scatter leafs on green clad trees
imposing mountain peak’s peerless zenith

Early morning horde salute day ahead
zestful footstep mandate for gumption
fervour  under the sun-drenched copse
Water sprinkler’s icy spray
cast in rainbow droplet
wet haired strollers grin
beyond a douse
dream colours
gold reign
now

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2025 5:45:00 AM

Creative way to go with this one. I wouldn't want to be caught in a water sprinkler this morning with the nippy air. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2024 10:05:00 PM

So many beautiful images here. I sure love the etheree form.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/1/2024 5:51:00 AM

Dear Howard, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of the early morning hours, highlighting the beauty and rejuvenation that comes with the start of a new day. The vivid imagery of nature, from swirling aural visions to dazzling shades, evokes a sense of joy and energy, reminding us to appreciate the world around us. The poem paints a picture of a vibrant and colorful morning, filled with sights and sounds that awaken a sense of vitality and renewal within us.