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Swings and Roundabouts

A torrent of life, Bursting like a bud in spring. Face squashed to a smile, Leading me with eager grip To the see-saw and the swings.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/6/2014 7:50:00 AM

Very thought provoking write, Mike

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2014 5:16:00 PM

Outstanding tanka...Reminds me of my daughter s eagerness tto go in the playingfield.May life be full of going up on that see-saw,and few of going down.

Mike Miller
Date: 8/5/2014 5:50:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine. This is based on my own memories of taking my daughters to the playground and their unbridled excitement and sheer joy just swinging, sliding and see-sawing !