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Swinging On Memories

stopped along the road to synthesize a poem a feathery mimosa honeysuckle vine entwined my mind with its scent the sweetened sapling of youth the flutter of faeries and butterflies on wild rose I’m swinging on memories held tight, wild hair asunder 6/18/2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 1:07:00 PM

thought i'd find an example of one of your choka writings. Stunning one here. My fave of the day

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2023 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/19/2020 12:49:00 PM

You got the faerie high...swinging on dreamy memories...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2023 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/19/2020 7:06:00 AM

Mesmerizing imagery that captivates the mind and heart of your reader, dearest Kim. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2020 12:18:00 PM

If we could live within our poems :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/19/2020 2:29:00 AM

Memories good and bad are a great inspiration in our poems, Hope things have got better for you Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2020 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, Tom!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/19/2020 1:49:00 AM

swinging by the cradle of memory..... beautiful sharing..well crafted

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2020 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2020 7:52:00 PM

What's more comfy than a hammock, more daring than a trapeze, more fragrant than a bouquet of flowers? -- Why it's K.R. swinging on those sweet memories! Perfect penning, my friend! :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2020 9:39:00 PM

Thanks for a fun comment! Hugs...Kim