Kim Rodrigues Poet Choka

Swinging On Memories

stopped along the road
     to synthesize a poem
             a feathery mimosa
     honeysuckle vine
          entwined my mind with its scent
 the sweetened sapling of youth
     the flutter of faeries
          and butterflies on wild rose
I’m swinging on memories
held tight, wild hair asunder

6/18/2020

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Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2023 at 1:07 PM thought i'd find an example of one of your choka writings. Stunning one here. My fave of the day Kim Rodrigues August 5, 2023 at 6:44 PM Thank you so much, Andrea!

Arturo Michael June 19, 2020 at 12:49 PM You got the faerie high...swinging on dreamy memories... Kim Rodrigues August 5, 2023 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Arturo!

Demetrios Trifiatis June 19, 2020 at 7:06 AM Mesmerizing imagery that captivates the mind and heart of your reader, dearest Kim. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs xxx Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2020 at 12:18 PM If we could live within our poems :)

Tom Cunningham June 19, 2020 at 2:29 AM Memories good and bad are a great inspiration in our poems, Hope things have got better for you Kim. Tom Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2020 at 5:54 AM Thank you, Tom!

Mahtab Bangalee June 19, 2020 at 1:49 AM swinging by the cradle of memory..... beautiful sharing..well crafted Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2020 at 5:53 AM Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf June 18, 2020 at 7:52 PM What's more comfy than a hammock, more daring than a trapeze, more fragrant than a bouquet of flowers? -- Why it's K.R. swinging on those sweet memories! Perfect penning, my friend! :) Gershon Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2020 at 9:39 PM Thanks for a fun comment! Hugs...Kim