Michael J. Falotico Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star

A sky which was dark...
                                               I traveled blind without sight...
                                                   Searching and searching...
                                             Then a warm light passed by me...
                                                 "Rosanna" became my star...



                                                                  by
                                                      Michael J Falotico
                                                                 For
                                              Sweethearts "Swinging on a Star"
                                                              contest

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Debbie Duncan September 5, 2012 at 10:58 PM nice ;} I see why you won .

Cory Long August 11, 2012 at 2:29 PM congrats on your win in the contest with this stunning piece.. Soup mail cory

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 7:29 PM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet August 1, 2012 at 7:17 PM Wonderful tanka here Michael!Congrats on the win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 1, 2012 at 5:42 PM Congrats on your win with this beautiful, romantic write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams August 1, 2012 at 3:05 PM Michael congrats on your win...you big smoothie..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 1, 2012 at 7:49 AM Many congratulations on your win Michael xx

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 12:34 AM CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 11:38 PM sweetness all over, michael.. rosanna must be proud!.. congrats with lotsa huggs!.:)

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2012 at 8:32 PM BEAUTIFUL, Michael. Her name is so beautiful too. Congrats on your win I see too.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 8:03 PM congrats Michael luv on 5th place.. for this beautiful starry entry luv.. Russell has won 4th..not 5th as list indicates.. my head is seeing double..oh..

Russell Sivey July 30, 2012 at 12:04 PM This is a fabulous and warm loving write my friend! I'm sure your "Rosanna" is happy to be in a poem of yours Michael! I really enjoyed this creative piece you have written! Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 30, 2012 at 8:30 AM Ahhh, so sweet Michael! A lovely entry for the contest!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Cory Long July 30, 2012 at 6:52 AM i loved your poem.. Good luck in the contest. cory