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Swinging On a Star

A sky which was dark... I traveled blind without sight... Searching and searching... Then a warm light passed by me... "Rosanna" became my star... by Michael J Falotico For Sweethearts "Swinging on a Star" contest

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/5/2012 10:58:00 PM

nice ;} I see why you won .

Cory Long

Date: 8/11/2012 2:29:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest with this stunning piece.. Soup mail cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 7:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2012 7:17:00 PM

Wonderful tanka here Michael!Congrats on the win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/1/2012 5:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful, romantic write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 3:05:00 PM

Michael congrats on your win...you big smoothie..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/1/2012 7:49:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Michael xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2012 12:34:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2012 11:38:00 PM

sweetness all over, michael.. rosanna must be proud!.. congrats with lotsa huggs!.:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:32:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL, Michael. Her name is so beautiful too. Congrats on your win I see too.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 8:03:00 PM

congrats Michael luv on 5th place.. for this beautiful starry entry luv.. Russell has won 4th..not 5th as list indicates.. my head is seeing double..oh..

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2012 12:04:00 PM

This is a fabulous and warm loving write my friend! I'm sure your "Rosanna" is happy to be in a poem of yours Michael! I really enjoyed this creative piece you have written! Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/30/2012 8:30:00 AM

Ahhh, so sweet Michael! A lovely entry for the contest!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Cory Long

Date: 7/30/2012 6:52:00 AM

i loved your poem.. Good luck in the contest. cory