Swinging On a Star

of all love spoken

  his words to me said it best

    for "eternity"

      love you more then there are stars

        a timeless and countless love...



By: Sharon Ruebel
Form: Tanka

For Linda-Marie's "Swinging on a Star Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:24 PM
nice Tanka Sharon....enjoyed
Ruebel Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so very much for reading and leaving a message Joseph.... As ALways, Shar
Harrington Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:25 PM
This is a Beautiful poem, a sure winner! :) Tanya
Ruebel Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Hello Tanya, Glad you liked my little Tanka, thank you for stopping by and leavings such a sweet message...Lov, Shar
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