Deborah Burch Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star

Swinging On A Star

Catching golden love,
These soft moonbeams in a jar,
You watch from above
As if swinging on a star--
"Memories”…of love…you are. 

deborahburch©
07/22/2012

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Matthew Anish July 24, 2012 at 12:42 PM Reminds me of the old Bing Crosby song about swinging on a star. Evocative work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Deborah Burch July 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM :) thank you Matthew...I am honoured...love , deb

Kash Poet July 24, 2012 at 9:28 AM Hmmmm...beautiful!!! Deborah Burch July 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM lol ;) thank you Kash...sooo much!! love ya, deb

David Williams July 22, 2012 at 4:21 PM Cap'n Deb, this reminds me of the sixties song ( you are tooooo young to know about) Perry Como, oh I sudennly feel sooo old, I like it, good luck...David Deborah Burch July 22, 2012 at 4:29 PM LOL..."or would you rather be a mule..."? ;) you're not that old dear...and besides ...I like the oldies, too...lol...thank you sooo much...love ya, Cap'n deb

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2012 at 3:12 PM So sweet and moving poem Deborah. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Deborah Burch July 22, 2012 at 3:28 PM oh thank you sooo much dear Anne-Lise!! hope you are doing well...love you bunches...deb