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Swinging On a Star

Swinging On A Star Catching golden love, These soft moonbeams in a jar, You watch from above As if swinging on a star-- "Memories”…of love…you are. deborahburch© 07/22/2012

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/24/2012 12:42:00 PM

Reminds me of the old Bing Crosby song about swinging on a star. Evocative work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Deborah Burch
Date: 7/24/2012 12:49:00 PM

:) thank you Matthew...I am honoured...love , deb

Kash Poet

Date: 7/24/2012 9:28:00 AM

Hmmmm...beautiful!!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 7/24/2012 12:49:00 PM

lol ;) thank you Kash...sooo much!! love ya, deb

David Williams

Date: 7/22/2012 4:21:00 PM

Cap'n Deb, this reminds me of the sixties song ( you are tooooo young to know about) Perry Como, oh I sudennly feel sooo old, I like it, good luck...David

Deborah Burch
Date: 7/22/2012 4:29:00 PM

LOL..."or would you rather be a mule..."? ;) you're not that old dear...and besides ...I like the oldies, too...lol...thank you sooo much...love ya, Cap'n deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2012 3:12:00 PM

So sweet and moving poem Deborah. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 7/22/2012 3:28:00 PM

oh thank you sooo much dear Anne-Lise!! hope you are doing well...love you bunches...deb