Andrea Dietrich Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star

You lit up my world
like the heavenly body
I’ve named after you.
Shine from wherever you are,
“Sweet Angel,” always my star!

by Andrea Dietrich
Inspired by the Contest of  
Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 7:28 PM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Kash Poet August 1, 2012 at 7:11 PM Congratulation on the big win!!Loved it!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 1, 2012 at 5:37 PM Congrats on your win, Andrea! I knew this beauty would place high! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams August 1, 2012 at 3:04 PM Andrea super congrats on your win, Yas, must love it..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 1, 2012 at 7:48 AM Many more congratulations on your win xx

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 12:32 AM CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 11:10 PM cherishing every word of your heavenly piece... love the name, sweet angel", andie.. congrats big time!..:) huggs!

Carrie Richards July 31, 2012 at 8:13 PM A lovely tribute to (perhaps your grandchild?) Congratulations, Andrea!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 7:59 PM congrats Andrea on the three spot in my star contest.. truly lovely entry.. luv..

Phyllis Babcock July 28, 2012 at 9:56 PM nicely done Andrea. love phyl

Joseph May July 24, 2012 at 7:14 PM very nice Andrea...enjoyed...hugs ..Joseph

Joann Grisetti July 23, 2012 at 3:39 PM A beautiful tanka for Linda Marie. Sure she will like it.

Joe Maverick July 23, 2012 at 12:54 AM Loved this Angelic write Andrea..)

Wilma Neels July 22, 2012 at 12:46 PM Andrea, I love the name of your star and I love your entry for Linda's contest :) love Wilma

Kash Poet July 22, 2012 at 10:13 AM Soupmail.............

Richard Palmer July 21, 2012 at 8:49 PM great write Andrea

Jack Horne July 21, 2012 at 11:30 AM lovely tanka, my friend

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 21, 2012 at 8:43 AM Enjoyed the well penned Tanka very much:) Jag

Kim Merryman July 21, 2012 at 8:02 AM An excellent write, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Ravi Sathasivam July 21, 2012 at 4:00 AM Beautifully crafted. Well done Andrea. Tfs

David Williams July 21, 2012 at 1:56 AM Andrea your words light up the page, good luck..David

Kash Poet July 21, 2012 at 12:10 AM Love it Andrea!Beautifully crafted tanka..Enjoyed very much.

Dan Kearley July 20, 2012 at 11:43 PM How sweet~<3 (o:

Jonas L. Rozario July 20, 2012 at 10:55 PM Very nicely done Andrea...love this!! Should do well in the contest!! Best wishes...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 20, 2012 at 10:49 PM I love your heartfelt gift of love, Andrea. A beautiful tanka and dedication to your Sweet Angel. Best wishes in the contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

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