Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star

sky wrapped in rhinestones

   knitting hands through love’s compass

       as one velvet  star

           pointing beam on embossed eyes

…he moans soft in light,  my ” dawn!”


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Linda Marie’s Swinging on A Star
By nette onclaud

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Sherese Gooden August 2, 2012 at 11:27 PM Congratulations Nette.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 7:26 PM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet August 1, 2012 at 7:08 PM Yayayaya!!!A big congrats !!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 1, 2012 at 5:31 PM Beautiful, Nette!! Congrats on your first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2012 at 5:09 PM wow, I'd not seen this. WELL deserved, my friend. Big congrats.

David Williams August 1, 2012 at 3:02 PM Nette, congrats on your win...fabulous..David

Joseph May August 1, 2012 at 8:18 AM nicely done Nette...congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 1, 2012 at 7:47 AM Many congratulations on your win xx

Debra Squyres August 1, 2012 at 7:15 AM Wow...this is beautiful !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 12:26 AM CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Carrie Richards July 31, 2012 at 8:12 PM A beautiful win!! It gleams with diamonds

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 7:56 PM congrats Nette luv on number one for your star entry.. truly beautiful..

Tim B July 25, 2012 at 7:28 PM You have a wonderful knack for great titles, and great poetry too of course. I love the personification and the vivid imagery as usual, a beautiful poem Miss Nette. Reads like a winner to me :)

Kash Poet July 24, 2012 at 9:09 AM Wonderful !!!!

Gwendolen Song July 23, 2012 at 2:28 AM A rhinestone wrapped sky? Oh how amazingly sparkly!! I feel the velvet stars as well, and feel the silky image of those embossed eyes! What a relaxing night sky, Nette...luv,gwendolen

Wilma Neels July 22, 2012 at 5:46 AM Aww, this is a beauty Nette, you just got me smiling and sighing at the same time.. that is a good thing ;) Wishing you the best for Linda's contest *hugs* Wilma

Bl Devnath July 21, 2012 at 1:56 PM Beautiful image of love. Loved always, bl

Elizabeth Wesley July 20, 2012 at 7:15 PM Beautiful Nette, you make it hard for others in contests! :)

Russell Sivey July 20, 2012 at 1:47 PM Awww, the love that you displayed within your great write is tremendous Nette! You sure do have talent bursting out of every part of your illustrious mind! Outstanding and creative piece here my good friend! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 1:40 PM Very expressive work..Winner's material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Richard Palmer July 20, 2012 at 12:55 PM great write love it Nette,Linda asked me to enter this competition gonna give it a try oxox

Painted Hunter July 20, 2012 at 11:02 AM Nette, you never fail to amaze me. You are truly a goddess of words. I'm a fan!!

Jancarl Campi July 20, 2012 at 10:55 AM Thanks for sharing such a beautiful work with us. Hope it is a winner, Jancarl

Joann Grisetti July 20, 2012 at 10:20 AM A very romantic tanka - surely a winner.