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Swinging On a Star

God's hand reached through time
dropping brilliance in the night
love's eternal gift
one star named for "my best friend"
our anniversary light


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

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Deborah Burch

July 22, 2012 at 2:16 PM

awsome!! :) love ya, deb

Elizabeth Wesley

July 20, 2012 at 2:53 PM

You must have reached up to take that hand Rhonda; swinging on a star is such a wonderful thing to do for the young at heart!

Sara Kendrick

July 20, 2012 at 10:41 AM

Oh! This one is just great..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Haven't heard from Doris today..We have tried several times..Thanks for the prays and concern...Sara

Wilma Neels

July 18, 2012 at 12:26 PM

This is a gem Rhonda, your tanka made me smile tonight :) love & blessings Wilma

Russell Sivey

July 18, 2012 at 12:14 PM

Awww, this is a very sentimental write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity of your magnificent poem! This fantastic piece is a blessing to the night! Great Work!!