Swinging On a Star

God's hand reached through time dropping brilliance in the night love's eternal gift one star named for "my best friend" our anniversary light By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

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Deborah Burch

Date: 7/22/2012 2:16:00 PM

awsome!! :) love ya, deb

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/20/2012 2:53:00 PM

You must have reached up to take that hand Rhonda; swinging on a star is such a wonderful thing to do for the young at heart!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2012 10:41:00 AM

Oh! This one is just great..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Haven't heard from Doris today..We have tried several times..Thanks for the prays and concern...Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2012 12:26:00 PM

This is a gem Rhonda, your tanka made me smile tonight :) love & blessings Wilma

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/18/2012 12:14:00 PM

Awww, this is a very sentimental write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity of your magnificent poem! This fantastic piece is a blessing to the night! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2012 9:44:00 AM

Rhonda, so good and well written tanka poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise