Swinging On a Star

I swung all night long
I broke the rocks for a "Spark"
A present it was
Not for I, but for her hair
Lost now, but found tomorrow




John Monteblanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 20, 2012 at 7:50 PM
nice write best wishes John
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