swimming to the grasslands

We are now swimming up the Boteti River, we twenty-three
To get to grasslands and savannah woodlands, you see
swimming is fun, sang the zebras, and the eating is free
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Costales Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 8:58 PM
I haven’t done monorhyme- have to look up rules. Anyway as it is, this is a fun read…the zebras agree and the eating is free —whee, count me in.
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March 11, 2024 at 11:09 PM
thank you Josefina - monorhymes are fun!
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