Swimming In Your Apathy

Broken by your formidable face,
In apathy one can only remain.
My love has been extirpated,
While you are just intoxicated.

So take a look at what's left,
This tearstained girl left out to dry..
Her blood runs cold,while
Last nights sins are washed away in a whisper.

This melody is set for repeat,
No more can this anguish prolong.
She's dying alone tonight,
A grim grave awaits this dispirited damsel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 11, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Mirella Grosnickle, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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June 14, 2011 at 6:25 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mirella. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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June 13, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Touchy and moving expressions, Mirella
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