Chris Green Poet Free verse

Swimming In Sarcastic Seas

Swimming in sarcastic seas

This is the hook,
that line I dangle out there
to catch your attention,
to tempt your appetite,
to reel you in like a poetic lure,
baiting you to read
as you swim about the site…

so where are all of the little fishies?

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 16, 2017 at 8:56 PM Hook line and sink her! Awesome ;) 7 seize Chris Green February 17, 2017 at 10:01 AM Ha, sink her....love that. Wish I'd thought of that. :) Thanks so very much Maureen

Jan Allison February 16, 2017 at 2:07 PM you hooked me in with the clever title Chris:-) hugs jan xx Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 2:12 PM Thanks so much Jan, just tossing a little sarcasm out into the waters. :)

Heidi Sands February 16, 2017 at 2:00 PM You caught the winner right here , Chris. LOL Just kidding. Congratulations on your writing and fishing. :) Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 2:03 PM Hey, no kidding there, you are right, I did catch a winner. :) Thanks so very much my friend.

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2017 at 1:45 PM well, i took the bait and you got my attention, chris... remarkable poetry once again!..huggs Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:49 PM Thanks so much Nette, I'm happy every time you are on my line. :)

Charmaine Chircop February 16, 2017 at 1:38 PM Here is one little fishy lured to every word...You're a great fisherman :) Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:49 PM Yay, you're a keeper. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.

Darren White February 16, 2017 at 1:35 PM I didn't read this, so.... Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:48 PM Good, I was hoping you wouldn't. :)

Eve Roper February 16, 2017 at 1:19 PM I'm here to get a nibble of your writes you got my attention :) Hugs Eve Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:48 PM Thanks Eve, I am happy I could lure you in. :)

Paul Callus February 16, 2017 at 1:13 PM Often it is the title which reels in the reader, Chris! You just managed to tempt me:) Regards // paul Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:47 PM Thanks so much Paul.

Kim Merryman February 16, 2017 at 1:13 PM Cute, Chris! Enjoyed your poem. Blessings, Kim Chris Green February 16, 2017 at 1:47 PM Thank you for your kindness Kim.