Swimming In Sarcastic Seas

Swimming in sarcastic seas

This is the hook,
that line I dangle out there
to catch your attention,
to tempt your appetite,
to reel you in like a poetic lure,
baiting you to read
as you swim about the site…

so where are all of the little fishies?

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Date: 2/16/2017 8:56:00 PM
Hook line and sink her! Awesome ;) 7 seize
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Chris Green
Date: 2/17/2017 10:01:00 AM
Ha, sink her....love that. Wish I'd thought of that. :) Thanks so very much Maureen
Date: 2/16/2017 2:07:00 PM
you hooked me in with the clever title Chris:-) hugs jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, just tossing a little sarcasm out into the waters. :)
Date: 2/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
You caught the winner right here , Chris. LOL Just kidding. Congratulations on your writing and fishing. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 2:03:00 PM
Hey, no kidding there, you are right, I did catch a winner. :) Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 2/16/2017 1:45:00 PM
well, i took the bait and you got my attention, chris... remarkable poetry once again!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I'm happy every time you are on my line. :)
Date: 2/16/2017 1:38:00 PM
Here is one little fishy lured to every word...You're a great fisherman :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:49:00 PM
Yay, you're a keeper. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Date: 2/16/2017 1:35:00 PM
I didn't read this, so....
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:48:00 PM
Good, I was hoping you wouldn't. :)
Date: 2/16/2017 1:19:00 PM
I'm here to get a nibble of your writes you got my attention :) Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I am happy I could lure you in. :)
Date: 2/16/2017 1:13:00 PM
Cute, Chris! Enjoyed your poem. Blessings, Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Kim.
Date: 2/16/2017 1:13:00 PM
Often it is the title which reels in the reader, Chris! You just managed to tempt me:) Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul.
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