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Swimming At Night

dive in deep from cool cement chlorinated water above my head breath held deep with easy glide swimming with you side by side under stars and crescent moon eyes shut tight against the burn surface break in the still night as you disappear from my heart's lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 3:18:00 PM
Excellent use of imagery, JB. I used to have a pool and swimming under the stars was always a wondrous activity. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:09:00 AM
love a night swim under a full moon and star filled sky...peaceful....TAH
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:44:00 AM
Very well written my friend...enjoyed....Michael
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