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Swimmies In My Broth

The cleaning ladies are here, oh boy! We'll soon get through the rubble, oh joy! Perhaps a bomb went off There's swimmies in my broth Doing the backstroke and loudly yelling ahoy! © Jack Ellison 2016

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Date: 1/19/2016 12:50:00 PM
You have cleaning ladies?... They won't come near us with Dragon around... I'm jealous you know... Cause our Trolls keep sweeping every thing under the rugs... And they're getting lumpier by the day! Olay!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/19/2016 6:08:00 PM
Maybe you could convince some cleaning ladies to wear battle gear!!! LOL xoxox
Date: 1/15/2016 5:38:00 PM
The broth hath a life of it own...with things in there unknown....could be a fly...or a lash from my eye...I just think I'll leave it alone
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:45:00 PM
If it moves and sings the star spangled banner, take it on the road!