Swim

Grave

River

Bodies sleep

Reaching upward

To catch a taxi on a floating creek
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 22, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Christopher, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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November 8, 2009 at 4:59 PM
Interesting write with a twist. Leave's the reader with several possibilities for a conclusion. Keep writing. Sara
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