Swiftly Spring

come back swiftly spring lily trumpets announcing ~~ warmer days ahead written October 8, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/9/2022 2:07:00 AM

I love the winter, but being an asthmatic who is triggered by cold air, it is not great for me. I love spring the best though, so this appeals to me today.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/9/2022 8:07:00 AM

It's hard for me to breathe, too, when the air is so cold. It's never good for heart patients! I hope you get along well this winter, Caren.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/8/2022 3:46:00 PM

We can hope, Milt. Got to make it through winter first though. :-( Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/8/2022 6:19:00 PM

So true, but I think spring to hold off the S.A.D. as long as possible!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/8/2022 2:35:00 PM

Can't wait already...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/8/2022 6:19:00 PM

I guess not, Michael, considering the types of winters you suffer through.

Gary Radice

Date: 10/8/2022 12:10:00 PM

Hi Milt. Let me be the first to comment on your haiku. Loved it. There's a positive air wrapped up in your words. Cheers - Gary

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/8/2022 12:58:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gary. I never feel really good about haikus I write, so this made my day!