Swiftly Fly

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The seconds swiftly fly Each filled with some new sound A lowing of a calf's sigh One bee buzzes nectar bound Hummingbirds' wings whir Crickets' chatter joins in Roosters crow as they stir Down in the foggy glen A golden sun illuminates The drenched scene after the storm Rain and dew upon the grass A new presence born_ There is a breeze from the north Cool air surrounds my place It calls me to come forth This pleasant morning embrace All of nature seems alive The hummingbird feeds again Mockingbirds fight contrived One tried to steal other's den A few minutes on the porch To thank God for this day His presence fills me with strength Help me to not stray

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 7/24/2018 11:09:00 AM

love it great write great poem all round thank you god bless duncan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2018 12:34:00 PM

Duncan, Your presence at my work is uplifting. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. Your comment is encouraging. Sara

James Horn

Date: 7/24/2018 9:17:00 AM

Just read poem again. It is a great explanation of life as it does exist. Hope God keeps us on path so we will not stray. We always need him.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2018 12:33:00 PM

James, I am mostly worried about me and keeping me on the right path but if everyone would attempt to get on the right path all of the problems of the world would settle down because God would be in control. Thanks for the visit to my page and the kind review of my work. Sara

James Horn

Date: 7/24/2018 8:15:00 AM

https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=Hymn+I%27ll+Fly+Away&&view=detail&mid=87253451CDE0CF84A40387253451CDE0CF84A403&&FORM=VRDGAR Here it is. Jim Horn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2018 12:32:00 PM

James, Not sure about this comment. LOL. I guess it is something you want me to visit. Sara ..Thanks for dropping by.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/22/2018 7:23:00 PM

Sounds absolutely divine, Mrs Sara. Nothing like a fresh morning after a rain. A most enjoyable read:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2018 5:57:00 AM

Daniel, Thanks for the visit to my page. The cooling rain in summer is a divine blessing. All of nature and man is refreshed and rejuvenated. Sara