Swift Wind

The nice swift wind,blows across my face
hitting me cold,in the life's bitter race.

The streets are lonely and lone I'm walking,
in the cold hostile air,hardly I'm smiling.

Searching for the one who held my hands
to make me feel warm like the magic wands

Still moving alone in the path of life 
feeling the pain through the edge of knife

Still wishing to go back in time to childhood
playing on streets like those in the neighborhood 

far better than moving alone searching for the one
who comforts me just like the morning sun

The nice swift wind ,seems romantic no longer
neither the cool breeze feels like the earlier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mahadani Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 4:26 AM
Thank you all and wish you a prosperous and happy new year
A   Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Biplab..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:16 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Biplab. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Fantastic picture of the silence and isolation you have worded well in this write. I hope it is for the contest on the theme of silence, Biplab
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