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Between the ground and the sky a glittery orb floating in the sea of gems It is a dream of gliding on an azure floor Upper and lower snow clouds Floating with me, dark and sluggish The twilight faded evenly. Illuminating the wintry landscape In the bleak pines, brilliant shards shine The wood mouse looks for red blossoms Sparkling spires in spotless snow frowning from a gnarled oak tree on top A tawny owl watches them in close vicinity. The golden dawn brightens the wintry realm Sparkling shards adorn somber pine Wood mice look for crimson blossoms Sparkling sprinklers on soft, spotless snow Frowning from a gnarled oak tree A tawny owl keeps a careful eye on them.   The water flowed slowly yet forcefully over graves near the smoldering flowers peaceful spaces with vivid colors When pressed, he listened to his inner voice This dense forest crossed the Sans Blunder They chat as they would normally do Slightly shifting the shade of span sight. Your silent forewarnings of impending doom waves of despair and angry yellow as warning lights for stormy oceans Leaden skies and torpid pain soothe my heart hearts exploding with love beyond space sprinkle sparkles on the moon The needy hands filled the voids with painful silence Inked in dark ink, unattainable solace They converse without paying attention to them I empathize with your suffering Do you feel what I am saying? Written: November 19, 2022

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Date: 11/19/2022 6:11:00 PM
The loveliness and depth of this poem is matched by its marvelous imagery. A brilliant work, Lasaad. Blessings
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Date: 11/19/2022 1:54:00 PM
All is one and one is all, my friend, Lasaad: The earth, the sky, the moon, the space, the animals the trees, and we spectators of this Cosmic synthesis, wonder how all came about to be and what is the meaning of it all? Extraordinary! Be blessed!
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