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Gaseous ice water floats across the field White exhale comes out of the mouth or nose thin roof, two infants crouching to shield Snow remains in these dreary sacred zones A wave of emotion that brings chaos Roaring anger melts away the ice of sorrow Distraught that melts cool, and again pathos ink dripping from a ripped paper swallow Pounding the beach of my dying drab life Intermittent and ruthless, the tides swell remembering the ancient sailor strife If the penultimate wave never goes well And fizzle the fire a fading soul can give! You breathed on me and raised me to live

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Date: 1/16/2023 1:53:00 AM
An intelligently written sonnet. You display great emotions in this sonnet.
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