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Swell, Well, Hell

"Swell. Well.... Hell." 

In that zone, playing from home   
When interrupted by the phone           
Then starting to cry              
And wanting to die                
It was about my student loan

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J. Truman Stewart

July 26, 2019 at 8:28 PM

great poem.

G. Jay

July 26, 2019 at 10:31 PM

Thanks

Ovidiu Bocsa

July 23, 2019 at 9:12 AM

I read some writings of yours and they are strong, beautiful and enjoyable.They deserve to take part in a collection of classical volume, especially those about war in Afganistan, connection with a Big Red Country a.so. They have a deep message and meditation on peace, morality a.so, thus rich in meaning. Best regards and wishes.

G. Jay

July 23, 2019 at 11:35 PM

Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate it.