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Swell, Well, Hell

"Swell. Well.... Hell." In that zone, playing from home When interrupted by the phone Then starting to cry And wanting to die It was about my student loan

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J. Truman Stewart

Date: 7/26/2019 8:28:00 PM

great poem.

G. Jay
Date: 7/26/2019 10:31:00 PM

Thanks

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/23/2019 9:12:00 AM

I read some writings of yours and they are strong, beautiful and enjoyable.They deserve to take part in a collection of classical volume, especially those about war in Afganistan, connection with a Big Red Country a.so. They have a deep message and meditation on peace, morality a.so, thus rich in meaning. Best regards and wishes.

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate it.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/14/2019 12:35:00 AM

Well, dang! So clearing could I feel this.

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:43:00 PM

I'm glad you like it. Thank you for stopping by.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/13/2019 8:30:00 PM

Lol, ouch! ;),

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:35:00 PM

hopefully it hit the funny bone.