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Sweety Peeps

liquorice sticks strawberry twizzlers, peppermint patty all I have adored since I was five hoarded in drawers, hidden in candy caddies, traded for with Sis and Dad, how we grinned with shopping bags filled to the very brim On that night of all nights when all nice neighbors did greet, each child or grownup with a candy treat,yes, Halloween. Costumes, some so easy in sheets they'd fly, wrapped in white with flashlights for eyes,they'd howl at the door and ask for their prize. Some parents, so absorbed, they'd complicate the scene by dressing their kids as golden yellow marshmallow peeps. So some kids were scary and some kids were sweet. Some children said BOO and others said TWEET!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/26/2014 6:39:00 PM
Really cute Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:45:00 AM
Sweets galore!! healthy sins...we fall into temptation...but we only live once! congrats on your win:) // paul
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:33:00 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, Debbie
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:48:00 AM
this is sweety tweety cute, Debs. I was a big candy addict when I was small. Not so much any more but once in a while I go for a whole bag of licorice or something!!
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:05:00 AM
I didn't know what to suspect and this turned out to be delightful.
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Date: 4/5/2014 5:37:00 AM
Ahh!! Great memories of Halloween..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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