Caleah Buil Poet Free verse

Sweety

What can I say about my brother Sweety?
He's sweet
He's kind
He's loving
He's funny
But most of all 
He's wise
So thank you Sweety for teaching me
How to live life fully
So I wouldn't grow up to be a bully. ;) 

NOTE: This is about my stepbrother, who has been there for me since I was born. I wrote this when I was about 12, acknowledging how sweet he is how much I adored him from since little. We actually NEVER call each other by our real names. Just Sweety. Lol!

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Litan Dey October 6, 2013 at 12:17 AM I read two poems of you and both based on family....This is rare.They are full of love! Sweet penned dear... Caleah Buil October 8, 2013 at 9:44 AM Aww, thank you! :)

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2013 at 11:40 AM Ha I like this one too... glad he's not about being a bully... your write such adoring poems.. xox..Linda Caleah Buil September 6, 2013 at 11:38 AM Haha, thank you! Thought I'd give back a little to the ones who really do love me, and stop being so depressing lol. :D

Sean L Sanders August 27, 2013 at 1:52 PM very sweet, it's been a long time since I wrote something sweet I miss sweet. nicely done poet Caleah Buil September 1, 2013 at 2:06 PM Thank you! Well you need to go write something sweet then! ;) But I know how that feels, I'm usually not a person who writes a lot of sweet stuff either. Usually when its sad I dive into it better.

Donna Jones August 14, 2013 at 6:21 PM Oh...I hope he has seen this poem..... Caleah Buil September 1, 2013 at 2:05 PM He has! My sister in law cried hearing it too lol! Luckily for him he didn't...not quite ;) haha

Poet Tacito August 14, 2013 at 2:22 PM Very, very adorable! :) Caleah Buil September 1, 2013 at 2:05 PM Haha Thanks! He thought so too! :P