Sweety

What can I say about my brother Sweety? He's sweet He's kind He's loving He's funny But most of all He's wise So thank you Sweety for teaching me How to live life fully So I wouldn't grow up to be a bully. ;) NOTE: This is about my stepbrother, who has been there for me since I was born. I wrote this when I was about 12, acknowledging how sweet he is how much I adored him from since little. We actually NEVER call each other by our real names. Just Sweety. Lol!

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Litan Dey

Date: 10/6/2013 12:17:00 AM

I read two poems of you and both based on family....This is rare.They are full of love! Sweet penned dear...

Caleah Buil
Date: 10/8/2013 9:44:00 AM

Aww, thank you! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 11:40:00 AM

Ha I like this one too... glad he's not about being a bully... your write such adoring poems.. xox..Linda

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/6/2013 11:38:00 AM

Haha, thank you! Thought I'd give back a little to the ones who really do love me, and stop being so depressing lol. :D

Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/27/2013 1:52:00 PM

very sweet, it's been a long time since I wrote something sweet I miss sweet. nicely done poet

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:06:00 PM

Thank you! Well you need to go write something sweet then! ;) But I know how that feels, I'm usually not a person who writes a lot of sweet stuff either. Usually when its sad I dive into it better.

Donna Jones

Date: 8/14/2013 6:21:00 PM

Oh...I hope he has seen this poem.....

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:05:00 PM

He has! My sister in law cried hearing it too lol! Luckily for him he didn't...not quite ;) haha

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 2:22:00 PM

Very, very adorable! :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:05:00 PM

Haha Thanks! He thought so too! :P