Sweets are best food

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04/29/25

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Contest by Constance La France.

Temptations for sweets could never be drained. All attempts to avoid sweets went in vain. To adore sweets, my tongue is trained. Demons of greed for sweets coul not be slain. Sweets are my most favourite, I can't refrain Compulsory in breakfast, lunch, dinner. Much addiction on sweets, how to abstain. Strong taste buds for sweets : Others are thinner. My stomach holds little capacity. My tongue is destined to taste sweet. Less staple food, sweets being priority. Rest taste buds are unable to compete. Due to stress developed sugar problem. Taking sweets with medicine, whom to blame ?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2025 4:30:00 PM

Oh this was a sweet delight to read. I love sweets to but I am able to stop after eating just a little. My problem is more with savory foods like spaghetti or enchiladas. Stuff with fats or salty!