Sand Blown Poet Free verse

Sweet-Orchard Poet Trees

(an oldt 'cave wall scratches' write...re-written   : )
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poet trees sweet-orchard door

waking as locked
in a dream of
plato's cave

a sentry there-in spoke
an exit code and
riddled questions

 - c - y - c -
1: see  - why see?
2: why - why see why?
3: see  - why see why see's?

so i pondered...3 -
why...see why see's?
and replied

why's...see why
seeing why...see's why
seeing why...sees why!

the sentry stated - exit...and
scratch your 3 = 2 + 1
outside the cave door then
enter the poet tree orchard

with a pebble i etched -
wise sees...why
why's see...wise why's


stans sand

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Brandy Nicole February 15, 2021 at 9:00 PM I see why.. all the see's.. see why. I just love your creativity. This made me smile. :) Brandy Sand Blown February 16, 2021 at 6:41 PM ...wowza...thanks....sometimes an itch (an idea) takes a while to etch out....scratch on paper.....it is a puzzle....stan sand

Judy Ball February 15, 2021 at 3:30 PM Duh I never was good at riddles but this is a very clever write. Nice job. God Bless, JB Sand Blown February 15, 2021 at 8:21 PM ...thanks for the reply....the riddle is a bit mixed...up....but... the the fun was in the doing.......stan sand