Sweetness - Rictameter

Sweetness
                Perfume, Flowers 
             A Gentle Rain-Shower  
        Candy Kisses, Chocolate Hour  
Spring Breezes, Sheltered Cover, Leafy Bower 
      The Sloping Curves of Your Profile 
          Tempting Lips that Beguile
               Love's Tender Smile
                                             Sweetness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Beautiful, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much, Line. :) gw
Pett Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Please accept my belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD Gershon, a joy to read. :))
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:19 PM
--only if you are willing to accept my belated response to your visit. Thank you, Roy! Best wishes, Gershon
Foster Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 2:50 AM
So much sweetness in so few words. Congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Gail! ~ gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 3:16 PM
How lovely this is Gershon! Congratulations on your deserving POTD!
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Much appreciated, Connie! ~ Gershon
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:22 PM
Returning with congratulations, Gershon, for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your beautiful poem. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Michael Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 6:12 PM
The WolfMeter... Congratulations...All the best my friend...
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 6:17 PM
O, Arturo! The WolfMeter is an immediate entry into the Comment of the Year contest! Thank you sooooo much! Best wishes, Gershon
Turner Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Leaves the reader smiling:) Congratulations on POTD, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:32 PM
And smiles are certainly a good thing! Thank you, Daniel. ~ Gershon
Sietesantos Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Big, Big congratulations, my friend, on your well-deserved POTD! This poem sparkles with the beauty of love and sweet romance! Such sweetness! Love and hugs. Pandita
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation. Best wishes always, Gershon
Doll Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Gershon. Well done.
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thank YOU, Warren! ~ gw
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 8:17 AM
what a sweet poem GW many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thank you for checking this one out and for your comment, Jan! ~ gw
Gondolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Gershon, congrats on POTD for this wonderfully written poem. It should do well in the contest. John
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Appreciate your encouragement, John. Best wishes, Gershon
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Wonderful sweet piece, congratulations for POTD honors Gershon, well done...
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Charlie, thank you for weighing in on this one. Best wishes, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Sweetness! You this time, not the poem, ;) congratulations on POTD! Didn't say last time, brings bowerbird to mind- I see a 'bower'. Have a lovely day Gershon! xomo
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Congrats Gershon, on poem of the day.
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:59 AM
An unusual form Gershon, good luck and congratulations on POTD. Greetings from sunny Florida. Tom
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Tom. Greetings returned from sunny, sweltering Chicago. ~ Gershon
Warrior Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 3:30 AM
Congrats!!! on your POTD!, Gershon...a sweet rictameter my friend...love & light...^WW^
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Thank you for checking it out! ~ Gershon
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 8:43 AM
A most interesting form and lovely feeling.
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Richard! ~ Gershon
Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Oh your poem is so luscious, Gershon.. sweet, romantic, tender and a fav! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation of this little number, Susan. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Sweetness indeed! Never seen this form before. Yummy fun :) xomo!
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:23 PM
It's actually for a contest, "Rictameter me." Check it out! And thanks weighing in, Maureen. ~ gw
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