Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Sweetness Is the Intention

Words swirl with an elegance
With strokes soft and smooth
Showing a certain arrogance 
Still my soul you seem to move

Letters written tend to excite
Romance in a story long last
Exclamation marks shows fight
Eyes excited listening to fast

Your elegant words kiss the page
Taking me to another dimension 
Where love overcomes the rage
And a sweetness is the intention

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Chris Green September 12, 2019 at 8:58 AM See, beauty flows from your pen Brenda. It always has but it seems each day you find a new way to show all of us your talent. This was amazing. Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:33 AM Thank you Chris! Lol we could argue forever on the subject but I know you don't like to argue so I will let you win this one!;)

Richard Lamoureux September 12, 2019 at 8:24 AM You do romance well. Hugs Rick Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:32 AM Thank you Ricky although I know a couple of people who would argue that point! But I'm gonna take it thanks again!;)

John Fleming September 12, 2019 at 7:27 AM A sound little poem, Brenda...the last verse is exceptionally good -- it just rolls off the tongue! In fondness. :) john Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:31 AM Ahh again thanks John! You are making my head big me thinks!;) All my affection!;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 12, 2019 at 7:24 AM Made me smile (and think of Chris) Lovely lines Brenda! Hugs, xomo! Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 10:31 AM Lol thanks Mo! Although I'm not sure I was thinking of him when I wrote it! Lol! But reading it again myself it does actually remind one of his poetry doesnt it! ;)