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Sweetness Is the Intention

Words swirl with an elegance With strokes soft and smooth Showing a certain arrogance Still my soul you seem to move Letters written tend to excite Romance in a story long last Exclamation marks shows fight Eyes excited listening to fast Your elegant words kiss the page Taking me to another dimension Where love overcomes the rage And a sweetness is the intention

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Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2019 8:58:00 AM

See, beauty flows from your pen Brenda. It always has but it seems each day you find a new way to show all of us your talent. This was amazing.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Chris! Lol we could argue forever on the subject but I know you don't like to argue so I will let you win this one!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/12/2019 8:24:00 AM

You do romance well. Hugs Rick

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Ricky although I know a couple of people who would argue that point! But I'm gonna take it thanks again!;)

John Fleming

Date: 9/12/2019 7:27:00 AM

A sound little poem, Brenda...the last verse is exceptionally good -- it just rolls off the tongue! In fondness. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:31:00 AM

Ahh again thanks John! You are making my head big me thinks!;) All my affection!;)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/12/2019 7:24:00 AM

Made me smile (and think of Chris) Lovely lines Brenda! Hugs, xomo!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 10:31:00 AM

Lol thanks Mo! Although I'm not sure I was thinking of him when I wrote it! Lol! But reading it again myself it does actually remind one of his poetry doesnt it! ;)