Sweetness Candy Starlight Glazes Over

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i dressed this piece one in a hundred

ten being a number of perfection

tercets from the title carry the trinity of words

in a style i do from time to time

Deeply liquid oceans fluttering waves crashing inside walls echoing whispers Caught within a silken web of dreams love Circle of never ending promise dove Spiritual awakening kisses Drunken sailor angel of forever Happiness floats upon silver moonbeams Dancing heartbeats applauding skips over the moon and back dressed in sunlight sparkles

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2017 7:05:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Liam - Best wishes for a peaceful and relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/2/2017 8:35:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^