Notes About The Poem

i dressed this piece one in a hundred 

ten being a number of perfection 

tercets from the title carry the trinity of words 

in a style i do from time to time 

Sweetness Candy Starlight Glazes Over

Deeply liquid oceans fluttering waves 
crashing inside walls echoing whispers 
Caught within a silken web of dreams love 

Circle of never ending promise dove 
Spiritual awakening kisses
Drunken sailor angel of forever 

Happiness floats upon silver moonbeams 
Dancing heartbeats applauding skips over
the moon and back dressed in sunlight sparkles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 7:05 AM
- A beautiful poem, Liam - Best wishes for a peaceful and relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 2, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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