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Sweetness

If only I could bottle you, somehow, safely bottle that essence, that sweetness, that makes all who taste it, smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 11:33:00 PM
Very interesting. Commendable. Liked it. rajat
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David Brown
Date: 9/5/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Rajat. I look forward to reading your work. - David
Date: 9/4/2014 11:09:00 PM
OH!!! This is going to my favorites, David. SO SO Sweet! :)
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David Brown
Date: 9/5/2014 2:58:00 PM
I am honoured Eileen, thank you!

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