Sweetness

The cold shower water,
Falls,
Seductively against our bodies,
Especially yours,
Since your body represents,
A candy shop galore,
And i couldn't ask for anything more,
Because of the sweetness you produce,
Satisfies my needs,
My hunger,
My thrust, 
My lust,
My curse,
Of falling in love,
With a full heart,
Waiting to burst.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 23, 2011 at 7:58 PM
I wish i could write like this.This is amazing!!
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September 23, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Happy weekend enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Kriss. Love, Carol
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