Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Sweetly Loving Beauty

Returning a pearl within each silver breath lining one gem treasure 
sweeping over deep sea waves tides turn in loves pure pleasure

Blue unfolding white washed emotions, sweeping over feelings
touching feathers of an angel floats inside warm strokes a celestial being

Woven inside golden petals kiss the magic heart of this shell opens 
hovering fingers dance fluttering hot waves galloping upon the crest breaks 

Sweetly landing on the sands of loves sweet beauty happiness sings 
in paradise holding two souls join hands bells of Heaven rings

Walking towards a sun setting dream rose gold crowning beauty
Eden desire bites from the tree of knowledge faraway uniting hearts duty

Sweetly dance together in an ocean tune flying without wings 
salt of this earth wet lips tasting destiny kissing your feet love rings

Beauty graces sea nymph with eyes of diamonds and bright sea-gold hair
wonders of all majestic earth no other maiden glows quite so fair

Heavenly notes echoes sweetly in the majesty of her alluring love songs
praise pours forth as she shines to delight her ever adoring throngs

Sun and sky conspire to gift her a wondrously staged ocean of calm
all the astounded world bows and eats lustily from her gentle palm

Tales of her beauty greater than palaces of diamonds, rubies and gold
angelic countenance that was the envy of legendary fairy queens of old

King Poseidon bowed down in defeat, laying love vows at her dainty feet
unable to control the ardor of his massively deep white-hot love heat

She that wept for a day and time with but one deserving male human soul
soft touches and wet kisses with that lost prince her secret love goal

Returning as a pearl within each silver breath she offers her treasure 
sweeping over deep sea waves she rides, a dream of loves pure pleasure


A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Robert Lindley 
thank you dear friend a pleasure writing this with you

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Vera Duggan January 17, 2015 at 6:56 PM Golly Liam and Robert this is one hell of a beautiful poem, I don't usually read collab's. but this one by two of my favourite poet's, absolutely lovely, take care my friends....................Vera.......... Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 1:29 PM yeah i am thinking about it just give the nod smiling vera wonderful comment dear pal bless you both Vera Duggan January 17, 2015 at 6:58 PM What a poem that would be three poet's from three corners of the world.

Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2015 at 8:49 PM A beautiful poem, I must say each couplet line was brilliant... Happy Birthday Liam.... hope you had a swell day... Linda Liam Mcdaid January 17, 2015 at 1:23 PM thank you linda ah your so sweet a year older storms here in ireland snowed in lol one to remember or should i say never forget first in my minds history with a big fire on almost like out in the wilderness ha ha my days are always beautiful surrounded by wildlife in the mountains untainted with natures song snowed in on my birthday plenty of rations in

Robert Lindley January 16, 2015 at 7:51 AM My good friend it was an honor to pen verses with you. Your verses gave such inspiration to write to!! Always a great pleasure my friend....... Liam Mcdaid January 17, 2015 at 1:18 PM robert dear pal your golden words just sailed this piece high truly bewitched me love how our piece drew heartfelt comment the pleasure was our joining pen thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis January 16, 2015 at 4:20 AM Roaring expressions of beauty majestically displayed! Congratulations to both of you: Liam and Robert, Robert and Liam and a seven to each! Happy Birthday, Liam! Liam Mcdaid January 17, 2015 at 12:51 PM hi demetrios dear pal thank you ever so kindly crowning beauty of a comment bless you deeply appreciated ahh you so sweet touched me very deep

Kelly Deschler January 15, 2015 at 8:23 PM A truly beautiful and enchanting poem written by two of my favorite poets... The imagery is absolutely stunning and I enjoyed the couplet rhyming. Excellent work, Robert and Liam! Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2015 at 1:27 PM thank you kindly kelly for the heartfelt really beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated pal

Dorian Petersen Potter January 15, 2015 at 8:21 PM Hi Liam and Robert ! A very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam and Robert! Filled of so much imagery.smilin.Just awesome! Very dreamy and sweet! A very solid 7 +++ ++ to each of you ! A very beautiful dazzling and romantic poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling.wow! That's a wonderful love story! Love it! My heart moved by it. I really enjoy it! Your pens are truly golden! Have a very wonderful evening! smiling. God bless you and be with you always!! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^" " Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2015 at 1:24 PM dorian dear pal truly wonderful comment roberts pen just blew this piece out or the water thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated bless you

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 15, 2015 at 7:53 PM A beautiful collab from two romantics! I love the ocean and how it inspires...hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2015 at 1:16 PM the ocean always draws the waves of beauty rhonda thank you kindly dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2015 at 11:53 AM - A truly romantic and beautiful writing from you Liam & Robert !! - The highest happiness is love .... so much bigger than ourselves - Such a pleasure to read! - A large 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2015 at 12:34 PM it sure is anne lise love rules with great joy a million miles away in a different space it is massive i think it warms even the coldest heart wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly pal i am sure robert will agree bless you with a smile

Eileen Manassian January 15, 2015 at 11:20 AM Lovely collab, you two. :) I love the sea and romance...Sweet Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2015 at 12:29 PM thank you eileen for the wonderful comment yeah the sea for me is a place of dreams nature just blows over waters causing the waves this was a fun write with robert his pen flowed gold wishing you a blessed week dear pal