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Sweetly Loving Beauty

Returning a pearl within each silver breath lining one gem treasure sweeping over deep sea waves tides turn in loves pure pleasure Blue unfolding white washed emotions, sweeping over feelings touching feathers of an angel floats inside warm strokes a celestial being Woven inside golden petals kiss the magic heart of this shell opens hovering fingers dance fluttering hot waves galloping upon the crest breaks Sweetly landing on the sands of loves sweet beauty happiness sings in paradise holding two souls join hands bells of Heaven rings Walking towards a sun setting dream rose gold crowning beauty Eden desire bites from the tree of knowledge faraway uniting hearts duty Sweetly dance together in an ocean tune flying without wings salt of this earth wet lips tasting destiny kissing your feet love rings Beauty graces sea nymph with eyes of diamonds and bright sea-gold hair wonders of all majestic earth no other maiden glows quite so fair Heavenly notes echoes sweetly in the majesty of her alluring love songs praise pours forth as she shines to delight her ever adoring throngs Sun and sky conspire to gift her a wondrously staged ocean of calm all the astounded world bows and eats lustily from her gentle palm Tales of her beauty greater than palaces of diamonds, rubies and gold angelic countenance that was the envy of legendary fairy queens of old King Poseidon bowed down in defeat, laying love vows at her dainty feet unable to control the ardor of his massively deep white-hot love heat She that wept for a day and time with but one deserving male human soul soft touches and wet kisses with that lost prince her secret love goal Returning as a pearl within each silver breath she offers her treasure sweeping over deep sea waves she rides, a dream of loves pure pleasure A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Robert Lindley thank you dear friend a pleasure writing this with you

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Date: 1/17/2015 6:56:00 PM
Golly Liam and Robert this is one hell of a beautiful poem, I don't usually read collab's. but this one by two of my favourite poet's, absolutely lovely, take care my friends....................Vera..........
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 1:29:00 PM
yeah i am thinking about it just give the nod smiling vera wonderful comment dear pal bless you both
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Vera Duggan
Date: 1/17/2015 6:58:00 PM
What a poem that would be three poet's from three corners of the world.
Date: 1/16/2015 8:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, I must say each couplet line was brilliant... Happy Birthday Liam.... hope you had a swell day... Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
thank you linda ah your so sweet a year older storms here in ireland snowed in lol one to remember or should i say never forget first in my minds history with a big fire on almost like out in the wilderness ha ha my days are always beautiful surrounded by wildlife in the mountains untainted with natures song snowed in on my birthday plenty of rations in
Date: 1/16/2015 7:51:00 AM
My good friend it was an honor to pen verses with you. Your verses gave such inspiration to write to!! Always a great pleasure my friend.......
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/17/2015 1:18:00 PM
robert dear pal your golden words just sailed this piece high truly bewitched me love how our piece drew heartfelt comment the pleasure was our joining pen thank you
Date: 1/16/2015 4:20:00 AM
Roaring expressions of beauty majestically displayed! Congratulations to both of you: Liam and Robert, Robert and Liam and a seven to each! Happy Birthday, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/17/2015 12:51:00 PM
hi demetrios dear pal thank you ever so kindly crowning beauty of a comment bless you deeply appreciated ahh you so sweet touched me very deep
Date: 1/15/2015 8:23:00 PM
A truly beautiful and enchanting poem written by two of my favorite poets... The imagery is absolutely stunning and I enjoyed the couplet rhyming. Excellent work, Robert and Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/16/2015 1:27:00 PM
thank you kindly kelly for the heartfelt really beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated pal
Date: 1/15/2015 8:21:00 PM
Hi Liam and Robert ! A very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam and Robert! Filled of so much imagery.smilin.Just awesome! Very dreamy and sweet! A very solid 7 +++ ++ to each of you ! A very beautiful dazzling and romantic poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling.wow! That's a wonderful love story! Love it! My heart moved by it. I really enjoy it! Your pens are truly golden! Have a very wonderful evening! smiling. God bless you and be with you always!! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^" "
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/16/2015 1:24:00 PM
dorian dear pal truly wonderful comment roberts pen just blew this piece out or the water thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 1/15/2015 7:53:00 PM
A beautiful collab from two romantics! I love the ocean and how it inspires...hugs, Rhonda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/16/2015 1:16:00 PM
the ocean always draws the waves of beauty rhonda thank you kindly dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/15/2015 11:53:00 AM
- A truly romantic and beautiful writing from you Liam & Robert !! - The highest happiness is love .... so much bigger than ourselves - Such a pleasure to read! - A large 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 12:34:00 PM
it sure is anne lise love rules with great joy a million miles away in a different space it is massive i think it warms even the coldest heart wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly pal i am sure robert will agree bless you with a smile
Date: 1/15/2015 11:20:00 AM
Lovely collab, you two. :) I love the sea and romance...Sweet
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 12:29:00 PM
thank you eileen for the wonderful comment yeah the sea for me is a place of dreams nature just blows over waters causing the waves this was a fun write with robert his pen flowed gold wishing you a blessed week dear pal

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