Sweetheart

These beautiful valleys, this open sky
The bud of my heart has blossomed in this spring
When I found you I found total happiness
There is sweetness flashing on your lips
Your hair is like a cloud on your cheeks
This garden is scented by the aroma of your body 
Your body is like marble
My dear, I am your moonlight
Please sing a love song today 
This is love's strong tie, 
see that it doesn't break dear
This is a bond for many lives, 
see that we don't separate dear
In your embrace I found my destination
Under the shade of your eyelashes I found love 
I long to place you in my heart, dear
Come, I will make you mine in this mischievous night 
I swear I will love you with all my heart, dear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/14/2013 10:39:00 PM
These are touching words full of heart and emotion. I can feel the sincerity and love flowing in each line. You have written a beautiful poem of caring and sweetness. Nice job
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/15/2013 12:53:00 AM
Thank you Robin~V~
Date: 11/12/2013 3:36:00 AM
well penned my friend :) A~D
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:43:00 PM
for ever, a good write, again
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/12/2013 2:52:00 AM
Thank you niki ~V~
Date: 11/4/2013 6:53:00 AM
Awfully romantic and something to be cherished.
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/5/2013 4:07:00 AM
thank you mark ~V~
Date: 9/25/2013 1:38:00 PM
A very lovely love poem. Really enjoyed reading thanks for sharing:0) Cherie
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/25/2013 9:24:00 PM
Thank u Cherie ~V~
Date: 9/24/2013 10:08:00 PM
A beautiful love poem to your sweetheart.
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/25/2013 1:48:00 AM
THANK U
Date: 9/24/2013 9:48:00 PM
Fine, descriptive love poetry! Matthew Anish
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/24/2013 9:58:00 PM
thnk u anish ~V~
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