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Sweetest Woman I Ever Knew

she was a big more pungent today than I imagined possible
and I thought she was gamey yesterday
That is the problem when you are in love with a corpse

I put more perfume on her; that usually does the trick.
Not this time. There was something wrong and her face is melting.
I wanted advice but trusted no one with my secret love.

She was shy and did not cotton up well to strangers.
if this did not keep up I might have to let her go.
And I was determined to not do that.

She was the most calm and sweet woman I had ever known.
She listened to all my woes, and she did this nightly
Without interruption.
Do you know how rare that is?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/10/2021 8:03:00 PM
Oh my! I gasped, I laughed, I cried. I think I saw a movie (or something) one time (perhaps story in a book) about someone who killed women and kept them until he needed a fresh one! Oh my, Caren........
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2021 12:58:00 PM
I know - when I do something this horrible I always BLAME TRIXIE my muse! It is horrible, I know!
Date: 3/10/2021 6:45:00 PM
Horror-comedy! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2021 12:58:00 PM
I know. Snicker. Snicker. I am SO pleased! *whee*

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