Sweetest Sin 20 Word Haiku

shes as beautiful as sweetest sin
wicked as any girl has ever been
dirty girl with the naughty naughty nightie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gorelick Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Well, I don't think we can make it a haiku, but it sure is a great piece. I love the rhymes and the alliteration. BG
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Lovely alliterative write, mark
Thajudeen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Tracing sweetness in sin.....long thought.
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:39 AM
lol loved the humour and the alliteration:-) hugs jan xx
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