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Sweetest Desire

on this autumn breeze your scent carries alluring me ...i crave you i can almost touch you through imagination i caress your edges with gentle strokes of my fingertips ...i desire you i can feel you against my lips playfully teasing tempting me to follow outside of dreams ...i need you i am weakened within this temptation i long to indulge in the depths of you and the pleasure you bring ...knowing you are forbidden one weakened moment wrapped in tender kisses could be my demise ...i bid you farewell my sweetest desire

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/15/2019 10:45:00 AM

I like the way you did the line breaks, this: "...." Adds impact. Sensual and emotional.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs

Pax Geist

Date: 11/14/2019 8:25:00 PM

Beautiful !! I read your reply to Kim and it totally applies in many events/ways. :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 8:51:00 PM

i agree and sometimes like poetry that lets the reader draw their own conclusion... thanks so much for your kind comment :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2019 10:46:00 AM

Temptation is near and forbidden...leaving the valley of curses, abandoning yourself for forever love. Nicely done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thank you...i was having fun with word play but was referring to chocolate (being a diabetic) i can't really have it... :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2019 10:08:00 AM

A desire driven poem, forbidden fruit always tastes sweeter, but we naturally shy away from it for fear of repercussions - great imagery here Sandra - i had to fav. this brilliant write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:08:00 AM

thank you so much Jennifer...i am honored :) hugs and blessings to you

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/14/2019 9:08:00 AM

Super write Sandy, great imagery among the desires and passion of this great piece.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:11:00 AM

thank you so much Gordon... :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/14/2019 7:16:00 AM

Lovely, lady... You always write so beautifully. Love to read your words. God bless you now and forever, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:12:00 AM

thank you so much Gina...hugs and blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 8:38:00 PM

Nice and romantic, sandy. Keep them coming!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 4:57:00 AM

Thanks Andrea who knew chocolate could be so romantic lol. Hugs

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/13/2019 7:46:00 PM

Sensual, beautiful, romantic and dripping with the honey taste of sweet desires! A very fine and inspiring piece my friend. A fav-- a true gem too.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 8:01:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/13/2019 4:31:00 PM

Very beautiful pen and sentiments.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so very much ML :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 3:36:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Line :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2019 2:23:00 PM

Oh, the attraction of forbidden love--one weakened moment wrapped in tender kisses. Hard to avoid when it happens--well painted, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay... my will power is pretty good regardless of my love for chocolate :) hugs

Na Na

Date: 11/13/2019 1:13:00 PM

Hi Sandra. Wonderful sensous poem. I love deep ones myself. They express how our minds compress our thoughts. Thanks for sharing this

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Gregory, for the visit and kind comment :)

Bobby May

Date: 11/13/2019 1:05:00 PM

Now that poem needs some strawberries and whipped cream, lol excellent Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 1:08:00 PM

Lol thank you Bobby I can have strawberries and actually they make an almond milk whipped cream that’s pretty tasty that I can have too :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 11/13/2019 12:48:00 PM

Melted chocolate now...your sweetest desire would have enjoyed some of this, for certain! Whew!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 1:07:00 PM

Lol thanks for the fun comment my friend ... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 12:33:00 PM

Beautifully sensual and brimming with sweet desire but it leaves me wondering...who or what is that sweetest desire and why are you saying good bye to it? I'm sure it is wrapped up in the sugary goodness of this amazing poem but I just can't seem to find it.You are amazing my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 12:38:00 PM

Thank you my friend, I am afraid I must say goodbye to the sweetest kisses in the world... delectable chocolate ones. Sugar’s not my friend, but I am glad you are... hugs :)