Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Sweetest Desire

on this autumn breeze
your scent carries
alluring me
...i crave you

i can almost touch you
through imagination
i caress your edges
with gentle strokes
of my fingertips
...i desire you

i can feel you
against my lips
playfully teasing
tempting me
to follow
outside
of dreams
...i need you

i am weakened
within this temptation
i long to indulge
in the depths of you
and the pleasure you bring
...knowing you are forbidden

one weakened moment
wrapped in tender kisses
could be my demise
...i bid you farewell

my sweetest desire

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Juliet Ligon November 15, 2019 at 10:45 AM I like the way you did the line breaks, this: "...." Adds impact. Sensual and emotional. Sandra Adams November 15, 2019 at 11:17 AM Thank you so much my friend... hugs

Pax Geist November 14, 2019 at 8:25 PM Beautiful !! I read your reply to Kim and it totally applies in many events/ways. :) Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 8:51 PM i agree and sometimes like poetry that lets the reader draw their own conclusion... thanks so much for your kind comment :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2019 at 10:46 AM Temptation is near and forbidden...leaving the valley of curses, abandoning yourself for forever love. Nicely done. Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thank you...i was having fun with word play but was referring to chocolate (being a diabetic) i can't really have it... :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos November 14, 2019 at 10:08 AM A desire driven poem, forbidden fruit always tastes sweeter, but we naturally shy away from it for fear of repercussions - great imagery here Sandra - i had to fav. this brilliant write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:08 AM thank you so much Jennifer...i am honored :) hugs and blessings to you

Gordon Mcconnell November 14, 2019 at 9:08 AM Super write Sandy, great imagery among the desires and passion of this great piece. Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:11 AM thank you so much Gordon... :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2019 at 7:16 AM Lovely, lady... You always write so beautifully. Love to read your words. God bless you now and forever, Gina Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 11:12 AM thank you so much Gina...hugs and blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2019 at 8:38 PM Nice and romantic, sandy. Keep them coming!! Sandra Adams November 14, 2019 at 4:57 AM Thanks Andrea who knew chocolate could be so romantic lol. Hugs

Robert Lindley November 13, 2019 at 7:46 PM Sensual, beautiful, romantic and dripping with the honey taste of sweet desires! A very fine and inspiring piece my friend. A fav-- a true gem too. Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 8:01 PM Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)

M. L. Kiser November 13, 2019 at 4:31 PM Very beautiful pen and sentiments. Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 4:54 PM Thank you so very much ML :) hugs

Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 3:36 PM Lovely, Sandra. Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 4:54 PM Thank you so much Line :) hugs

Vijay Pandit November 13, 2019 at 2:23 PM Oh, the attraction of forbidden love--one weakened moment wrapped in tender kisses. Hard to avoid when it happens--well painted, Sandy. Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 4:54 PM Thank you so much Vijay... my will power is pretty good regardless of my love for chocolate :) hugs

Na Na November 13, 2019 at 1:13 PM Hi Sandra. Wonderful sensous poem. I love deep ones myself. They express how our minds compress our thoughts. Thanks for sharing this Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 4:53 PM Thank you so much Gregory, for the visit and kind comment :)

Bobby May November 13, 2019 at 1:05 PM Now that poem needs some strawberries and whipped cream, lol excellent Sandra! Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 1:08 PM Lol thank you Bobby I can have strawberries and actually they make an almond milk whipped cream that’s pretty tasty that I can have too :) hugs

Hello There November 13, 2019 at 12:48 PM Melted chocolate now...your sweetest desire would have enjoyed some of this, for certain! Whew!! Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 1:07 PM Lol thanks for the fun comment my friend ... hugs

Chris Green November 13, 2019 at 12:33 PM Beautifully sensual and brimming with sweet desire but it leaves me wondering...who or what is that sweetest desire and why are you saying good bye to it? I'm sure it is wrapped up in the sugary goodness of this amazing poem but I just can't seem to find it.You are amazing my friend. Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 12:38 PM Thank you my friend, I am afraid I must say goodbye to the sweetest kisses in the world... delectable chocolate ones. Sugar’s not my friend, but I am glad you are... hugs :)