Hija De La Luna Poet Rhyme

Sweetest Child Alouette

Mom you're so lovely!
Like my lil’ bunny!
Your arms are fluffy and soft;
Want to hold you more;
Makes me feel secure;
With your hands all of me oft,

Mom you're so cuddly!
Want you beside me!
Wake me up a lil’ later;
Miss you so by then;
Like I miss you when
My eyes close and you’re not there.


* overheard my niece talking to her Mom as she was put to bed :))

9/1/14

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Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 4:10 PM You won me over by saying this was overheard of your niece. Precious! Congrats for your win. Hija De La Luna September 16, 2014 at 12:33 AM Grateful here, Andrea! God bless!

Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 3:10 PM Congratulations Hija on this lovely poem. Hija De La Luna September 16, 2014 at 12:34 AM Thanks, Brenda! God bless!

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 1:45 PM This is my number one it is simply delightful! many congrats hugs jan xx Hija De La Luna September 16, 2014 at 12:35 AM thanks, Jan! hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 7:45 AM Oh how sweet. Reminds me of my little 2 and a half yr. old granddaughter. Big congrats on your win! Hija De La Luna September 15, 2014 at 8:14 AM oh, about the same age as my niece, Connie! surely, she is adorable! :) thank you!

Eileen Manassian September 1, 2014 at 1:24 AM OH! :) Loved this write. So beautiful and sweet...words that have the magic of a child's heart and soul. Beautiful, Hija. Thanks for sharing. Hija De La Luna September 3, 2014 at 1:04 AM thank you, Eileen! thanks for your kind words! God bless

Maurice Yvonne August 31, 2014 at 10:42 PM a perfect ten. children are the most vital of all life. If we always considered innocent children in our desisions it would be heaven on Earth. a great read, thank you. Hija De La Luna September 3, 2014 at 1:06 AM thank you, Maurice! i totally agree with what you said about children and making decisions. God bless you

Tim Smith August 31, 2014 at 10:30 PM How cute...love kid speak when they are being all loving.....hugs Tim Hija De La Luna September 3, 2014 at 1:08 AM thanks, Tim!