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Sweetest Child Alouette

Mom you're so lovely! Like my lil’ bunny! Your arms are fluffy and soft; Want to hold you more; Makes me feel secure; With your hands all of me oft, Mom you're so cuddly! Want you beside me! Wake me up a lil’ later; Miss you so by then; Like I miss you when My eyes close and you’re not there. * overheard my niece talking to her Mom as she was put to bed :)) 9/1/14

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Date: 9/15/2014 4:10:00 PM
You won me over by saying this was overheard of your niece. Precious! Congrats for your win.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/16/2014 12:33:00 AM
Grateful here, Andrea! God bless!
Date: 9/15/2014 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations Hija on this lovely poem.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/16/2014 12:34:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda! God bless!
Date: 9/15/2014 1:45:00 PM
This is my number one it is simply delightful! many congrats hugs jan xx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/16/2014 12:35:00 AM
thanks, Jan! hugs!
Date: 9/15/2014 7:45:00 AM
Oh how sweet. Reminds me of my little 2 and a half yr. old granddaughter. Big congrats on your win!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/15/2014 8:14:00 AM
oh, about the same age as my niece, Connie! surely, she is adorable! :) thank you!
Date: 9/1/2014 1:24:00 AM
OH! :) Loved this write. So beautiful and sweet...words that have the magic of a child's heart and soul. Beautiful, Hija. Thanks for sharing.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/3/2014 1:04:00 AM
thank you, Eileen! thanks for your kind words! God bless
Date: 8/31/2014 10:42:00 PM
a perfect ten. children are the most vital of all life. If we always considered innocent children in our desisions it would be heaven on Earth. a great read, thank you.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/3/2014 1:06:00 AM
thank you, Maurice! i totally agree with what you said about children and making decisions. God bless you
Date: 8/31/2014 10:30:00 PM
How cute...love kid speak when they are being all loving.....hugs Tim
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/3/2014 1:08:00 AM
thanks, Tim!

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