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Sweeter Than Wine

He pops the cork from vintage vine, then bubbles dance in scarlet wine I look his way, his eyes find mine The stars align, the stars align! He pours the glass, and as it tips one drop remains there, as I sip I leave for him upon my lips My heartbeat skips, my heartbeat skips! The wine my lips had not yet met becomes a bliss, I'll not forget A kiss that tastes of sweet claret Not one regret, not one regret
________________________________ Inspired by the Contest: Monetetra Sponsored by Kim Merryman 6/26/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/13/2013 7:19:00 PM
That Poem has class written all over it....nicely done Carrie :)....Shaz
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Date: 7/11/2013 6:00:00 PM
Carrie, fantastic all the way through. The stars align, the stars align... beautiful ...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:29:00 PM
A delightful poem...sweet as wine, Carrie! :) Congratulations on your well deserved win! Always, Annalise
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Date: 7/10/2013 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Carrie. Your romantic verses dazzle and inspire. We seek romance to express our feelings of love towards the one we adore.... and you express them very well in your brilliant verses. Enjoy your moment of glory. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:02:00 AM
Amazing piece, congratulations.
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Date: 7/10/2013 1:18:00 AM
Congrats, Carrie, on this win with this delectable piece!!
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:35:00 PM
Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 2:33:00 PM
Carrie, your verses flow just as smoothly! Showstopin' poem here with perfect rhymes, and ideas that seem to rhyme too!
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:54:00 AM
Cheers on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:25:00 AM
Carrie, this was so romantic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:19:00 AM
You sound tipsey ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:42:00 AM
No regrets. Sippin' from the bottle of life, one drop at a time. Embracing the flavor. Beautiful!
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:31:00 PM
I love this Carrie! I'd call this "exquisite" : ) This is definitely one for my List of Favorites! Thank you for your kind compliment. I am honored that you took the time to read it. Love, Annalise
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Date: 6/26/2013 3:12:00 PM
`Beautiful! ~ It's All In The Kiss Is What We Say, Sweet Beautiful Carrie ~ I Am Going To Favour This, Magical Moment, Of Splendours As Dreams ~ Love, John
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