Sweeter Fresh Breath

Miss Brown’s lips turned violet,
After kissing him without regret,
She hadn’t felt his gums
In purple flavored plums, 
His secret for sweeter fresh breath.


Feb. 9,2022  7.07pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Oh wow Len, I know Andrea will love this entry. It made me laugh like a great limerick should. A humorous delight! Blessings xxoo
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February 10, 2022 at 11:16 PM
I hope so dear Connie. Thank you for your kind words and for stopping by. I'm glad it made you laugh and felt delighted. Blessings to you too.
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