Sweet Whisper

I feel your breath on my neck
 I feel the warmth of your hands on my hips
 a sweet whisper lingers along the lust of your tounge
 on the edge, desire burns
 knees are weak
 as my heart beats tingling down my spine
 our love becomes intwine..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kearley Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Ahem.....lol..Passionate indeed! :o)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 3:47 PM
Tastefully passionate and sensual! Vivid imagery... explosive language. Well done Kerry!! Best wishes, Keith
Ornelas Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Yhis might be the one
Duncan Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 7:06 PM
I love this one Kerry,,, kinda like my " Let Me come Over" ;} thank you for reading. I have used the "breath on my neck line" I wrote one called "dawn of time" along the lines of this one ;}
Poet Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:06 PM
WoW...Very passionate one!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Who can resist a sweet and romantic poems like this, Kerry .... lovely! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Scott Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 7:00 AM
VERY SENSUAL PEACE MATE HOW YOU ARE OK AND HAD GOOD CHRISTMAS DID YOU GET MY SOUP MAIL XX DAVDSCOTT
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