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Sweet Whisper

I feel your breath on my neck I feel the warmth of your hands on my hips a sweet whisper lingers along the lust of your tounge on the edge, desire burns knees are weak as my heart beats tingling down my spine our love becomes intwine..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/10/2013 11:02:00 AM
Ahem.....lol..Passionate indeed! :o)
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Date: 1/7/2013 3:47:00 PM
Tastefully passionate and sensual! Vivid imagery... explosive language. Well done Kerry!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/6/2013 7:18:00 PM
Yhis might be the one
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Date: 1/5/2013 7:06:00 PM
I love this one Kerry,,, kinda like my " Let Me come Over" ;} thank you for reading. I have used the "breath on my neck line" I wrote one called "dawn of time" along the lines of this one ;}
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:06:00 PM
WoW...Very passionate one!
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Date: 1/4/2013 11:04:00 AM
Who can resist a sweet and romantic poems like this, Kerry .... lovely! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2013 7:00:00 AM
VERY SENSUAL PEACE MATE HOW YOU ARE OK AND HAD GOOD CHRISTMAS DID YOU GET MY SOUP MAIL XX DAVDSCOTT
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