Sweet Things (Septet)
Succulent
Fruit hanging on vine
You tempt me with your sweet juice
I do so love your taste and your scent
If only I wasn’t full
Then you’d be all mine
Completely
Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
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