Kelly Deschler Poet Rhyme

Sweet Talk

She walked into the ice cream parlor and took a seat,
a date on February 14th, her secret admirer to meet,
she used to think Valentine's Day was silly and stupid,
until those ridiculous thoughts were shot down by Cupid.

The door opened and there he was, handsome and tall,
he sat down, didn't speak, but his dark eyes said it all,
instead of poetry, he gave her a candy conversation heart,
a cute little gesture just to get the romance to start.

She fell hard for his sweet talk like you wouldn't believe,
her shyness had disappeared, and it, she could not retrieve,
completely blinded by love that she could no longer see,
when he handed her another and the sweet heart said, KISS ME.

Grabbing more, she threw out the sour heart that said, NO WAY,
in the past she might have kept that one, but not today,
the next candy heart read, BE MINE, then it broke in two,
so they shared it, and the next one which said, I LOVE U.

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 7, 2016 at 12:54 AM Yeah this one is pretty sweet. Lovey-Dovey all the way! LOL! Nice work! MC Kelly Deschler December 6, 2016 at 9:14 PM Thank you so much, MC :)

Willow Lawrence March 12, 2015 at 7:31 PM Totally sweet! Kelly Deschler March 22, 2015 at 12:23 AM Thank you very much, Willow!

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 2, 2015 at 1:40 PM As sweet as honey you have penned here, lovely sentiments draped in sincerity. Kelly Deschler March 8, 2015 at 6:00 PM I really appreciate your lovely comments. Thank you very much, Iris!

Robert Nehls February 13, 2015 at 5:23 AM Hi Kelly. What a wonderful poem you have offered us readers. Love at first sight is not a myth. It happens more often than we think and it can last a lifetime. When it does, well, you just have to throw all the NO WAY'S. very sweet, I enjoyed it, my friend.... Robert. Kelly Deschler February 16, 2015 at 9:08 PM Hi Robert, I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem and you are so right, my friend. When love comes along we should hold onto it as tight as we can and never let go... Thank you so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate them!

Cherl Dunn February 7, 2015 at 9:06 AM Charming and amusing, very romantically written, thank you also for your birthday wishes, cheri Kelly Deschler February 9, 2015 at 12:12 PM You're welcome, my friend. Thank you for your nice comments, as well.

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 4:58 PM Cute and quite romantic. Kelly Deschler February 8, 2015 at 3:02 PM Thank you for your nice comments, M. L.

Liam Mcdaid February 4, 2015 at 8:35 AM excellent piece of writing kelly very beautifully painted dear friend Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 6:40 PM Thank you so much for your kindness, my dear friend Liam.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 4, 2015 at 3:15 AM How romantic Kelly,, love the perfect rhyming here,, a super 7 my friend n best wishes! Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 6:32 PM Thank you for your nice comments, Dr. Upma. I enjoyed writing this poem, I'm happy that you enjoyed reading it, my friend!

Ravi Sathasivam February 3, 2015 at 10:40 PM Excellent.Lovely romantic write.Enjoyed. Tfs Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 6:22 PM I'm happy that you enjoyed it, Ravi. Thank you very much for your kind comments.

Paul Callus February 3, 2015 at 2:59 PM How lovely and cute, Kelly! Sweet talk, indeed! This merits a top rating and more. Well done. // paul Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 12:53 AM Thank you so much, Paul. I appreciate your nice comments, my friend. It was fun to not write something so deep and dark for a change :) I'm happy that you liked it!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2015 at 2:13 PM - So sweet poem, Kelly - I LOVE IT 2 :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 12:37 AM I'm happy that you liked this poem too, Anne-Lise. It was a fun one to write! Thank you for your nice comments. Hugs :)

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 1:30 PM Oh Kelly this is such a cute romantic write - I LOVE IT - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xxx Kelly Deschler February 6, 2015 at 12:22 AM I'm happy that you liked this one, Jan. It was a lot of fun to write! Thank you so much! Hugs :)

Neva Romaine February 3, 2015 at 1:22 PM Hey Kelly, a truly great expression of Valentine love. Hearts opening up to each other. I love this. Be Blessed, Neva Kelly Deschler February 4, 2015 at 5:29 PM Hey Neva, thank you very much for your nice comments. I really appreciate it and I'm happy that you've enjoyed my poem!