Sweet Sweet Lorrayne { Rondel}

<                                          Sweet sweet Lorrayne
                                            No voice to speak
                                            Smile always peaked
                                            Just wanted to end her pain

                                         
                                            Known to one and all
                                            Cookies cakes she loved to bake
                                            Orders were never to small
                                            Family tradition she wanted to make


                                            Meds and revival she wanted nil
                                            Family and friends held her hand
                                            Assured she would wake in the promise land
                                            Lit a candle and placed it next to cross in window sill
                                            Oh ye hearts tears did over ~ flow and fill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Wonderful write Katherine and nice use of catchy words and phrases.. enjoyed this early Saturday morning.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:28 AM
A nice character drawing
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